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Microfiction Monday: She’s a Looker!

Posted on Sep 20, 2010 by Lisa Ricard Claro   22 Comments | Posted in microfiction

It’s another microfiction Monday, where 140 characters or less is all that is allowed to tell a story matching the photo.  Visit Susan at Stony River for links to other microfiction stories.  My microfiction tale is below:

She’s a looker, Al thought.
He glanced at the road, the miles yet ahead, and eyed her pretty heeled shoes.
Not too bright, though, he mused.

Hope y’all enjoy your Monday!

Til next time –
Lisa

22 Responses to "Microfiction Monday: She’s a Looker!"

  1. Comment by Deborah
    September 20, 2010 at 6:39 am  

    Such a good one … Ilove this!

  2. Comment by Lisa Ricard Claro
    September 20, 2010 at 6:48 am  

    Thanks Deborah!

  3. Comment by David
    September 20, 2010 at 7:57 am  

    Not to bright? Maybe momma never told her to wear sensible shoes. Funny!

  4. Comment by Bill ~ {The Old Fart}
    September 20, 2010 at 8:40 am  

    If Al was a gentleman he could maybe try to find some transport for her. Nice take on the photo.

  5. Comment by Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joy
    September 20, 2010 at 9:28 am  

    What a cool painting. I like what you wrote, Lisa.

  6. Comment by Priyanka Bhowmick
    September 20, 2010 at 10:19 am  

    nicely put down

  7. Comment by Ellie
    September 20, 2010 at 10:50 am  

    LOL. That is too funny! No gain without pain, and as it got his attention, I think the heels worked.Have a lovely week x

  8. Comment by Dave
    September 20, 2010 at 11:17 am  

    Very nice.DaveDave Wrote This

  9. Comment by sylviamorice
    September 20, 2010 at 1:55 pm  

    I love this! Wonder how far they'll walk before she joins him in 'barefoot comfort'?Have a great week. Cheers!

  10. Comment by Pat
    September 20, 2010 at 2:06 pm  

    Thanks for the morning chuckle, Lisa. This is really cute.

  11. Comment by Lisa Ricard Claro
    September 20, 2010 at 2:47 pm  

    Thanks, everyone, for the comments and feedback. I appreciate it!

  12. Comment by John's comments
    September 20, 2010 at 2:49 pm  

    and he's walking barefoot…hmm who's short of a picnic basket Thanks for dropping by to read my 140 Hope your week goes well

  13. Comment by Diane
    September 20, 2010 at 3:51 pm  

    Uh oh…. something's bad a brewin'!!! :O)

  14. Comment by Oregon Gifts of Comfort and Joy
    September 20, 2010 at 7:50 pm  

    OMG!!! Lisa, your blog is beautiful!!! Way go to go. :>)

  15. Comment by septembermom
    September 20, 2010 at 8:04 pm  

    She was just trying to look good!! LOL. Loved it.

  16. Comment by quilly
    September 20, 2010 at 9:03 pm  

    I've got to tell you I felt the same way about those heels. I just wasn't smart enough to write about them!

  17. Comment by KB
    September 21, 2010 at 3:53 pm  

    She'll regret wearing them for sure.Great MM.

  18. Comment by Tammy
    September 21, 2010 at 6:26 pm  

    What a neat way to exercise your writing muscles! Love it!

  19. Comment by Karen Lange
    September 21, 2010 at 6:54 pm  

    Love this idea and enjoyed your version. Love your new look, too!

  20. Comment by Lynn
    September 22, 2010 at 8:41 am  

    Nice microfiction story!

  21. Comment by Cathy C. Hall
    September 22, 2010 at 2:37 pm  

    Ha! Good one! And doesn't your blog look nice?

  22. Comment by Lisa Ricard Claro
    September 22, 2010 at 8:06 pm  

    Hey Cathy – Thanks. I'm so wishy-washy it took me forever. I've taken "undecided" to a whole new level. LOL


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