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Microfiction: Pompous Investigations AND Belly Proof

Posted on Jun 19, 2011 by Lisa Ricard Claro   23 Comments | Posted in Grandma's Goulash · Succinctly Yours

Grandma’s Goulash graciously hosts Succinctly Yours, the wonderful meme for those of us addicted to microfiction. The trick is to write a story in 140 characters or less using the photo below as inspiration. To add to the challenge is the word of the week, “fabricate.”  My stories are below.

 Pompous Investigations

“I say, milady,” sniffed the Earl. “Whatever is that riff-raff doing?” 
“That’s my butler,” she smirked. “He’s inspecting you for pomposity.” 
(140 char)

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Belly Proof
“This belly lint proves you killed the weaver!” declared the detective.
“Sheer fabrication!” she cried. 
“No.” He took a closer look. “Wool.”
(139 char)

Wishing you a wonderful Monday!

See you next time –
Lisa

23 Responses to "Microfiction: Pompous Investigations AND Belly Proof"

  1. Comment by cambronwriter
    June 19, 2011 at 7:37 pm  

    Haha. I like 'em both.

  2. Comment by Bookie
    June 19, 2011 at 7:58 pm  

    I used to weave so I really liked the second one, Lisa!! Hope you have had a good weekend.

  3. Comment by Helen
    June 19, 2011 at 7:58 pm  

    Both very clever!

  4. Comment by Kay L. Davies
    June 19, 2011 at 8:59 pm  

    "No, wool." I love that line. And I know some people who should be inspected for pomposity. LOLTwo good ones, Lisa.— KKay, Alberta, CanadaAn Unfittie's Guide to Adventurous Travel

  5. Comment by Sioux
    June 19, 2011 at 10:16 pm  

    As usual, both are great. "Sheer fabrication" is a great play on words.

  6. Comment by Susan Fobes
    June 19, 2011 at 10:36 pm  

    Lisa, I laughed out loud on your second one-you are so good with these!

  7. Comment by Grandma's Goulash
    June 20, 2011 at 12:20 am  

    Both are so witty that it is impossible to pick a favorite. You are just too clever, Lisa.

  8. Comment by Sarah
    June 20, 2011 at 6:34 am  

    Hahaha! Both of these are so awesome! Fantastic job.

  9. Comment by Anonymous
    June 20, 2011 at 7:06 am  

    My goodness you are clever. I loved them both. Thanks for the giggles. Arkansas Patti

  10. Comment by jabblog
    June 20, 2011 at 8:28 am  

    Very funny, both of them. I like the word play – that always makes me giggle.

  11. Comment by Ellie Garratt
    June 20, 2011 at 8:39 am  

    Snort. Snort. I can't stop laughing! Very clever!Ellie Garratt

  12. Comment by Debra Mayhew
    June 20, 2011 at 9:29 am  

    As always, great job, Lisa! I love the second one. Very cute!

  13. Comment by Cathy C. Hall
    June 20, 2011 at 9:30 am  

    As always, you canNOT go wrong with belly lint! Thanks for the smiles!

  14. Comment by Pooch
    June 20, 2011 at 9:46 am  

    Both are very clever and witty!:)

  15. Comment by Sharkbytes (TM)
    June 20, 2011 at 10:40 am  

    We saw the same person. Very cute.

  16. Comment by Tammy
    June 20, 2011 at 11:25 am  

    Just when I thought it couldn't get better than being inspected for pomposity, you went and did those wonderful, wonderful word plays on the second one! Love them both!

  17. Comment by Sonia Lal
    June 20, 2011 at 1:10 pm  

    they both made me laugh! wonderful wordplay on fabrication.

  18. Comment by Pat
    June 20, 2011 at 1:29 pm  

    I thought I'd already laughed the most at someone else's SY, but now you have won for the funniest and most clever! Belly lint – LOL! That should be incorporated into one of the CSI shows.

  19. Comment by Anyes
    June 20, 2011 at 1:30 pm  

    You are amazing at the wordplay. I am still laughing reading this 😉

  20. Comment by Joanne
    June 20, 2011 at 10:17 pm  

    Love the second one..very clever! Blessings, Joanne

  21. Comment by K9friend
    June 21, 2011 at 7:47 am  

    Loved them both, Lisa! You are clever and very funny!Patwww.critteralley.blogspot.com

  22. Comment by Jim
    June 21, 2011 at 12:00 pm  

    Good ones, Lisa! 🙂 I suppose that the test for pomposity is one that a pompous person often makes. He wouldn't want to be outdone…Thank you for peeking in on my gnat hair with Irish fingerprints. And for your nice comment…

  23. Comment by Katie Gates
    June 21, 2011 at 12:23 pm  

    Funny!


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